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Revisions for Book of Secrets

Revisions for Father & Bride & Betrayal

Revisions for Prophet and Loss

LadyShelley posted a month ago


Here is the revisions link for Prophet and Loss:

Much better on the 'that' front. You had a couple of places where commas worked better than periods, and a couple of sentence fragments but that's about it. Take a look, and let me know if you have questions.

For the Dick Miller article, there was only a minor thing with 50s, 60s, 60s instead of 50s, 60, 70s when talking about his TV work.



LadyShelley posted 5 months ago

This is the public messaging system I can use. Or I can email you. :)