Hey Gislef. Have you been able to sign into TV.com? I haven't been able to for over a week using three different browsers. I hit enter and nothing happens. It's not like I'm locked out or banned, the form just will not work even after turning adblock and everything else off. Just wondering. Thanks...sounddude.
Much better on the 'that' front. You had a couple of places where commas worked better than periods, and a couple of sentence fragments but that's about it. Take a look, and let me know if you have questions.
For the Dick Miller article, there was only a minor thing with 50s, 60s, 60s instead of 50s, 60, 70s when talking about his TV work.